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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The use of lines, reflection, the fact that the horizon is level (brownie points with me)...
"Grey light" as we call it here, (the "almost light" as we sit out waiting for sunrise in hunting season...) is difficult to work with at best...but I noticed the ever-so-slight tinge of pink, promising a new day...very kool...
The bird is an absolute exclamation point at the end of the line, the tree line is as hazy as it occurs naturally...Though myself, I may have bumped up the blacks just a notch, maybe two-but not enough to be obvious..."clarity" would bleach out the sky a bit, I think..
I do not see the point in removing anything from a photo unless it is indeed a sensor problem, (which I can't see here) or an obnoxious powerline in a landscape...and then, only if it is seriously offensive...
I try to take one photo only, except for critters and portraits as a rule, in order to improve my composition and ability to "see" what I want SOC...For example-if there were no shoreline or objects to the left...I would have turned to the left, in order to minimize the space to the right...but not too much...
Simplicity can be an awesome thing...rules were made to be broken, and if you get too technical, then it becomes science-not art...
Keep up YOUR vision...for it IS yours...
I have seen the World and I have seen this before........it totally captures everything I have seen.
The 'above' critique is nonsense to me......this is real life.
PLEASE do NOT change a thing.
Waking up in the East...........in the very early morning, before the sun rises...........this is exactly what I have seen.
Magnificent.
PLEASE keep on going.......do NOT get implicated in Critiques like the above.
I am so interested that you kept this completely 'pure!'
Thank you so much
HUGS
Jenny
Well done. I am always 'watching' you
First class.
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